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Reading this poem on Vale of Soul-Making struck me to the core, it is so exquisite.
That mingling of the erotic with child-like wonder.
That last line, so unexpected. So perfect.
Untitled
This was the first time I knelt
and with my lips, frightened, kissed
the lit inwardly pink petaled lips.
It was like touching a bird’s exposed heart
with your tongue.
Summer dawn flowing into the room parting the
curtains—the lamps dimming—breeze
rendered visible. Lightning,
and then soft applause
from the leaves . . .
Almost children, we lay asleep in love listening to the
rain.
We didn’t ask to be born.
— Franz Wright, “Untitled,” Earlier Poems (Alfred A. Knopf, 2007)
Are we not all like a bird’s beating heart waiting to be touched deeply?
We did not ask to be born. Yet here we are, out of nowhere, dropped into this world of wonder. How can we account for that? All we can do, given this gift of grace, is to keep parting all the tender petals before us till the core of who we are is revealed.
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Ahhh, Deborah what a poem and what a question? “Are we not all like a bird’s beating heart waiting to be touched deeply?” asked in the trembling moment with two young lovers, that we might all lie that open and vulnerable to the dawn. I felt a huge sigh escape me at the end as tho I’d just landed somewhere safe. Thank you.
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Thank you for that. It sounds like this poem struck you the same way it did me. Your poetry and posts so often strike me the same way. Kindred spirits.
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Beautiful poem and reminders. Thanks Deborah.
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Thank you Brad. I’m so glad you thought so too.
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