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ancient rituals, chants, Dreams, nursery rhymes, poetry, songs
My dreams have always been enticingly rich and evocative. Often it’s as if I’m watching an elaborate film in gorgeous Technicolor, exquisitely choreographed. Sometimes I am a character in that film. But often I’m standing outside the action, waiting to see what happens.
When we were sailing my dreams were especially vivid. One morning I woke with a song playing in my mind that had been sung in my dream by the people of some ancient kingdom. It was almost as if they were chanting it, as if they were singing something that had been handed down to them over the ages, something to be sung on special occasions.
I had the feeling upon waking that something momentous was about to take place. A royal wedding? A coronation? A sacred initiation?
Upon waking I wrote down all that I remembered—which is quite unlike anything else I’ve written. But all these years later, I am still mesmerized by its beauty.
Truly, it is not mine, but something I overheard. It’s time I share it.
Song from A Dream
Five golden rings adorn her toes,
But the Queen’s sole lies naked.
Garlands of lilies lace buttocks to hips,
But between them her belly beckons.
Sashes of satin encircle her waist,
But her legs lie loose and languid.
Sapphires and rubies stream from her neck,
But her breasts are bare as mountains.
Bracelets of silver ring her wrists,
But her arms are free and fervent.
Rivers of ribbon flow through her hair
But her back is a gleaming dessert.
Ashes of coal shadow her lids,
But her eyes are two burning candles.
Juice from wild cherries stain her lips,
But her breath is the Khamsin blowing.
Mysteries and marvels flow from her mouth,
But my Queen’s soul lies naked.
I don’t know what the song means, if anything. It reminds me of a favorite nursery rhyme:
With rings on her fingers, and bells on her toes,
She shall make music wherever she goes.
This nursery rhyme has no meaning that I know. Nonetheless, its playful images are so enticing.
This dream fragment may be like that. But I sense there’s something deeper going on, which the play on the words sole and soul in the first and last lines calls to mind—a reminder perhaps that for all our attempts to adorn ourselves, our most pleasing and precious parts, our very essence, our souls, perhaps, are best seen naked.
What do you think? Is this a meaningless but pleasing rhyme? Or something deeper?
Your guess is as good as mine. I was only taking dictation.
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i don’t think it means this, but it reminds me of being able to appreciate other women’s beauty as well. growing up i was insecure and often jealous. i feared passing my prime and the intensity of that increasing. but somewhere along the way, i turned a corner, lost that insecurity and jealousy. and how freeing to now take joy in the youth and vibrancy of others, to be happy for them, happy to be around them. to want to build them up even, adorn them with confidence and love.
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I think there is something of that in this–the ability to appreciate feminine beauty and power as a thing in itself, aside from how women individually express this. There is, for me, something iconic about the image of this queen in how she represents something important about being a woman, perhaps. And we appreciate what we see of this in each other.
So glad you shared this with us.
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Deborah, the Queen’s song is wonder-full. I reminds me of the Song of Songs, or medieval sacred love poetry, something from Rumi. Truly it has issued up from a mythic place under the surface of the waters where the soul lies naked, where the mystic Beloved sings love songs of the deep. I wouldn’t try to make anything of it. It feels like a gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Mmmm . . . yes, the Song of Songs. I do see something of that in this. And I love how you put it, “coming from a mythic place under the surface of the waters.” The mystic Beloved. I like that. It does indeed feel like a gift. Thank you so much for writing.
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The images are wonderful Deborah…adorned and unadorned. A pure pleasure to read! If dreaming this inspired you to write as your form of expression, circumnavigating your chosen material like the queen… going ever deeper, seeing all sides, I’d say you have been living this inspiring gift. A free and fervent chant!
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Thank you, Jana. I do see this as a sort of chant, something very old, handed down. If it doesn’t make me seem too crazy, initially the thought was strong that the dream may have tapped into some ancient, collective memory, and I was actually hearing something sung long ago.
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this makes me think of someone (the society?) trying to parlay and mould the queen into what she *should* be but the queen adamantly refusing this vision that’s being thrust upon her and standing sure and confident in her own awareness of who she really is.
either ways, thanks for sharing! i usually have such dreams too (i mean dreams where i know oh this is going to make for a really good story!) and they’re usually fun!
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Yes, I sense something of that too. A queen is required to be a certain way, to fulfill certain expectations and responsibilities. At the same time she has enormous power to give and withhold what is expected. To do that wisely, she must know who she is and what is needed better than anyone around her. A ruler must know herself and her people, and the realm in which they live.
It would make an interesting story! Thank you for coming here and sharing your thoughts.
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Deborah, the rhyme is beautifully written (and amazingly remembered). My thought was that although she is adorned with all those lovely items, it is her natural being that is the most attractive.
Kind of what your other readers have said,
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Thank you, LB.
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I love the rhyme as a wonderful dharma
liberation for self seeking adornment fever
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I like that Susan–dharma liberation!
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My dreams always offer me story ideas. Once there was a song in my dream, but when I woke up I couldn’t remember it. And I love to write song lyrics, so that was disappointing. This reminds of me a goddess. Maybe an African of Egyptian goddess and the song is meant to praise her. 🙂
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Yes, it reminds me of a goddess too. Usually I don’t remember things quite this clear from dreams, but it’s like it was sung over and over again, so I woke up with it singing in my mind.
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Wow – what a dream that must have been! And the song is especially amazing. I really think you could get that published and I definitely think it means something. Others will probably see other meanings but once you see a meaning or a shape in something you can’t not see it.
What I see is that first several stanzas represent the interplay between art and nature, but then beginning with the stanza about her eyes (the windows to the soul) it transitions to the interplay between art and the soul. So you begin with “sole” as part of the physical body, or nature, and end with “soul” as the spiritual part of the woman who is speaking “mysteries and marvels” – which invokes the idea of art meeting the spiritual. I’m glad you remembered enough of that dream to get this amazing piece written down.
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I’m so glad you liked it, CJ. Someday I might include it in a book of poetry, meditations that I’ve written over the years to share with others. Interesting what you say about the interplay between art and nature and art and soul. I’d noticed too it seems to move from the ground/nature/toes, to her head/thoughts/soul. Thank you for coming here!
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That’s quite beautiful to come from a dream, and to remember it clearly enough to write it all down! I love that painting, too. My father used to have an art book that used it for the cover. I never opened the book, because I was too young to realize it was a book and not a painting-painting.
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Beauty is only skin deep… lustful but hollow… hopefully not a struggle between your ID and SuperEgo…
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