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adventure, exploring, human consciousness, Milky Way, poetry, sailing, Sea of Cortez, swimming, universe, writing
Last night I swam among the stars. The air and water temperatures were both 78 degrees, so it felt like I was moving from one warm atmosphere into another more dense when I stepped in my pool. There was no moon and the Milky Way was strewn across the sky like scattered bones of light. When I lay on my back to watch them, it felt like I was floating among the stars.
And then I realized–I was! We all are.
We sail across the universe on the back of a tiny planet at the edge of a galaxy that swirls around us. Too often we forget that–how embedded we really are in the universe.
I became acutely aware of this one night when we were crossing the Sea of Cortez from Baja to mainland Mexico. There was no wind, no moon. The sea was perfectly still like the surface of a dark mirror, marred only by our trailing wake.
Above us the bare mast stirred a billion stars, which were reflected in the sea’s surface below. I felt like we were on a starship sailing through the cosmos.
Later that night I wrote this:
Night Crossing, Sea of Cortez
The sea appears so simple
With a dark, indulgent face
The stars there twice reflected
Like a world spun out of space
Our sloop shoots through the cosmos
Through a mute and moonless night
Our wake a fiery comet
Streaming effervescent light
With all the universe inert
We slip from star to star
Then reach across the Milky Way
Toward galaxies afar
Eons swirl, light-years unfurl
And none can still our flight
Leaping toward the infinite
To apprehend the light.
I’m not alone in seeing the overlap between the ocean and the night sky. Various artists are fond of depicting whales and dolphins and other sea creatures swimming among the stars. The ocean and the universe stand at the edge of the wild, the last two true frontiers we have to explore, except for the human consciousness, of course. The ocean and the universe have become symbols for consciousness as well as adventure.
We seem to grasp that there is something that connects all three—some deep, dreamy, ever-flowing, ungraspable, powerful yet nurturing element in which we all are steeped. That calls us to move beyond ourselves, beyond the safe and familiar, the already known. That inspires us to reach for something that lies just beyond our grasp.
I’m still reaching. Are you? What calls you to move beyond yourself into the unknown?
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This has brought tears. There is something so terrifying and yet calming about experiencing our smallness in relation to all that surrounds us. A feeling of being so alone … but connected by a chain of other small beings.What calls me to move beyond myself? Equal measures of fear and tenacity …
P.S. I’m so intrigued and in awe of your round-the-world travels. When I was a child, I watched The Dove, the film that chronicled Robin Lee Graham’s teenage voyage around the world on his boat. It left such a lasting impression upon me.
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Thank you, Jacqueline, for stopping by and commenting. I read “The Dove” long ago too, and it was truly impressive, especially for one so young. I don’t think I could sail solo the way he did and others do today. I really admire those who can. It definitely would take great measures of fearlessness, and tenacity, and skill.
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Your image of the stars reflected in the dark sea took me back to a night in northern Ontario after a sweat lodge when we floated in the deep old glacial lake. The sparks of the fire rose into the sky to join the stars and the light of both fell over us in the water. Laughter rose from us like the stars and the fire full of joy.
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That sounds lovely–water, air, fire, earth–when they all come together in a moment like that, magic happens.
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Reblogged this on Living on the Edge of the Wild and commented:
I started my blog six months ago, and have nearly 100 followers now. To mark this mile-stone, I will be re-blogging a couple of my favorite early posts. Here’s one of them.
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I’m so glad you re-blogged this Deborah, I wouldn’t have wanted to miss it.
I live on the edge of the sea, and find that the combination of stars, moon, sea and silence is like a permanent pillow beneath my sleep.
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Thank you Valerie. I love that last line about the permanent pillow–beautiful.
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What a simply gorgeous post. Such a good idea to reblog your favourite posts so that more recent followers get a taste of old gems. I loved: The sea was perfectly still like the surface of a dark mirror, marred only by our trailing wake.
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Thank you!
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Thanks for re-posting this cosmic account, Deborah! It’s surreal and beautiful. It reminded me of a similar scene in Ang Lee’s awe-inspiring film, The Life of Pi. Have you seen it? But then, you’re seen the real thing. 🙂
The Vedas proclaim, Aham Vishwa, I am the Universe, Aham Brahm, I am Totality. We reside in it and it resides in us, the microcosm and macrocosm. It’s a state of consciousness worth striving for, its our birthright, our destiny.
Speaking of which, you forgot to add ‘to’ in this sentence towards the end: That inspires us (to) reach for something that lies just beyond our grasp.
Keep writing and sharing your special experiences of our precious planet and your intimate reactions to them. They’re uplifting.
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I haven’t seen The Life of Pi yet, but looking forward to watching.
Yes, I love that, that sense of oneness–I am the Universe. And I appreciate the heads up on the missing “to.” Thank you for your encouragment and comments. It means so much to me.
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WordPress offers bloggers an opportunity to put their blog posts into a book format. You may want to consider doing this with your world travels to exotic places. Could make for an interesting piece of literature for travel, poetry and other genres. May take time but keep collecting and recording your experiences. You never know where it will lead you.
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That’s a great idea! I’ll look into it. I do want to create something about our travels to pass on to the next generation of our family.
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An absolutely wonderful poem, Deborah. 🙂
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Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it.
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Wonderful post. The reflection of the immense night ky in the water represents to unity of the mind , above as below.
Thanks for visiting my blog. It is much appreciated.
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Hi Deborah ..
I am Kokila and I stumbled on your blog while searching for images of reflection of stars in water to go with a Haiku i wrote… I am glad I found you as its a beautiful place and you have some amazing pictures !
I have borrowed one of these and linked it back .You can see it here –
http://sunshineandblueclouds.blogspot.in/2015/02/play-haiku.html
If you have any issue regarding it , just give me a nudge and I’ll remove the image 🙂 Till then, Thanks a lot Deborah 🙂
Love n cheers
Kokila.
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